Sunday, 31 March 2013

Rose's Final Fan Fiction


Old boy is owned by Show East and Egg Films. All the copy rights associated with Oldboy and the Vengeance Trilogy belong to them. The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo is owned by Steig Llarsson and Norstedts Forlag. All the copy rights associated The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo and the Millennium Series belong to them. Only the ideas contained within the story are the property with the author. No profit is being earned by the writer of this story.

This Adultfic is rated R, it contains themes and scenes of violence.

This story will be focused towards the end of the movie, where Daesu finds out why he was imprisoned and finally visits Woojin in his penthouse. He's accompanied by Lisbeth, there they search for answers and uncover the truth about Woojin. As they  find out what they've been looking for, a sudden  turn of events lead them into something twisted.


Oldboy 

It was dusk by the time they arrived. Daesu stood there and stared up at the complex, the hammer felt warm in his hand, the one possession he knew would help him find her. He turned towards Lisbeth, her pale face covered in studs with the same cold expression she had the day he met her.
“Are you sure this is it?” he said.
“Yes” she replied with a tone of emergency in her voice.
“What floor?”
“Forty One…” Turning briskly he rounded the corner with her in tow, and stormed towards the foyer. They made their way towards the elevators, oblivious to the calls from the security guard on duty. They stood there waiting, and stared at the group of oncoming residents, who scattered at the unlikely sight before them.
He stared blank at the doors, with his bloodied suit, his hair and face dishevelled. “Which one, Lisbeth”
“Take the lift, it’ll take us to him” She had the brief case with her and knew what was coming around the corner.  
They made their way up towards the penthouse. He needed answers and Woo Jin had them all. He had waited fifteen years for this moment with his tormentor. Tonight he was going to feel the brunt of his hammer, but not before he gave them what they were looking for.

The elevator doors opened, they could see a silhouette, a tall figure staring out towards the sky line. He turned and made his way towards them. They were greeted by the sounds of clapping. Clap, clap, clap “So the beast has finally made his way back to his master.” The smile on his face widened as he saw Lisbeth, he stopped short “Oh…and who do we have here? The beast has brought a friend.”
Daesu glared at the man before him. “Hey dick shit, I know why you put me in there. I ran my mouth. Those rumours killed your sister. I tore apart your family. Is that it?” His temper started rising. “Was that your fucking  revenge? To lock me up” The clapping continued.
In a stone cold voice he spoke again. “What have you done with my daughter? Where’s my daughter?” Clap, clap, clap. He couldn’t restrain himself. He ran at him with his hammer…
It had been fifteen years since he was kidnapped. Fifteen years since his life fell apart. He remembers the day vividly, it was his daughters 5th birthday. For no apparent reason he was kidnapped and imprisoned in a private facility. Here he lived as a captive and watched his life deteriorate before him. 

Within the first year, he was set up for killing his wife. If he had known there was going to be fifteen more years, would it have been easier? Why? Who? Questions ran through Daesu’s head. He deserved an answer, one way or the other he was going to get them tonight with the help of Lisbeth. They had both tracked him down.
He had met her online, while trying to hack through security files of Woo Jin. She was going to help Daesu. She introduced herself as a private investigator, looking into the corrupt business ventures of Woo Jin. So far she had uncovered an underground human trafficking ring involving missing prostitutes. The same prostitutes whose tortured bodies were showing up dead around the city. She knew he was behind this operation, no matter what, she was going to bring his empire down…

Daesu swung the hammer across at Woo Jin missing his temple and hair line. He turned and looked at Lisbeth, fury running through his eyes, “Hold him down”. Without any warning she came at Woo Jin with a Taser gun. 50 volts surged through his body, he froze stiff and collapsed like a falling tree. Daesu moved swiftly and tied his limp body to a chair. He turned and watched as she made her way towards the desk by the window. “I’ll need to take a look at his files, the girls must be kept nearby”. She turned on the computer and saw the surveillance monitors turned on. She looked closer at the monitor, it was pitch black and she couldn’t make out the images. “What is this?”
The sound of a stir startled them both, he spun and made his way towards Woo Jin. “Open the case he’s coming around”. Daesu watched as Lisbeth casually opened the case and took out the dentist retractor. “Now, I’m going to ask you again” he watched as she pulled apart his mouth and separated his cheeks. She handed the clamp to him and nodded. He sat across Woo Jin and spoke in a low voice “Where. Is. She?” Suddenly the phone rang, the sound ringing across the penthouse. He turned his head toward Lisbeth eyes fixed intently on Woo Jin “Answer it”.

This must be Blomkvist, she was expecting the call from him. She was helping Daesu find his daughter “Hello, Blomkvist”
“Lisbeth, he wants him there, it’s a setup!”
“What Is?” Did he manage to find her, she must be alive.
“I looked into his past, his daughter she’s alive. I tracked her down but she’s been missing for the past two weeks. Word on the street is she’s been working as a prostitute. Under the same pimp as the dead missing girls. Two weeks Lisbeth that’s exactly the same time Daesu was released…Lisbeth there must be a reason why Woojin’s led him there…”
She stared at Woo Jin and watched as his eyes became wider, a look of amusement written across his face. She didn’t like it, not one bit. She could hear Blomkvist on the line “Lisbeth are you there?” Some things up, she stared at him as she tried to piece together the puzzle. It hit her. “What have you done with her?” She said aloud. She dropped the phone and the line went dead.
“What did Blomkvist say?” Daesu interjected, he was alarmed by the tone in her voice. She repeated the question again this time grabbing the clamp off Daesu. Her face inches away from Woo Jin, “What have you done with her”.
“Aaha, ha, ha, ha, haa”. The sound of his sickening laugh echoed across the room. With his mouth spread wide open, and his eyes wide with the look of delight on his face. Daesu intervened and grabbed her by the collar “Lisbeth! What did he say?”

He picked up his hammer. “She’s here. She’s been missing. He knows, he knows where…” The words were coming out faster then she realised. “Daesu the girls. She’s a prostitute. He’s got her”. It hit him hard, he isn’t finished. This is all a part of his revenge; the noise became louder as Woo Jin started shaking in fits of laughter. Daesu realised the kind of sick bastard he was dealing with, Woo Jin was going to kill every woman he ever loved and his beloved daughter was no exception.

“Where. Is. She?” The hammer came down hard on Woo Jin’s face tearing apart his cheek bone. Woo Jin fell backwards, sprawled out onto the floor, his binds coming undone.
“Fucking. Tell me!” He slammed it down hard again this time crushing his collar bone.
Daesu enraged by the news of his daughter, charged again towards Woo Jin.  Woo Jin twisted and crawled his way towards the desk, his hand shaking in the direction of the monitor, leaving a trail of blood along the floor. Lisbeth couldn’t help but notice the blank monitor coming to life. She could see what appeared to be an underground dungeon. Daesu slipped on the blood covered floor as he tried one more time, to pound Woo Jin with his hammer.
Lisbeth looked closer at the monitor and saw the images that came to view. It showed a girl tied to a surgical bed and what looked like a man by her side with a hacksaw.  The girls, Lisbeth knew she had found them. The look of shock covers her face as she barely manages to yell out. “Daesu. Stop!”

Daesu raised his hammer mid-air, and looked towards the screen. Woo Jin sprawled out on the floor points at the monitor, face gaping with his bloodied wound. He stares at Daesu, the look of amusement on his eyes piercing through his blood soaked face. 
The screaming, where was it coming from, the screaming became louder and louder as it echoed across the penthouse and mixed with the sickening laughter from Woo Jin.
That's when he saw it. Daesu stared intently at the screen, his mouth dropped at the sight of his daughter before him. “It. Can’t. Be”



To be continued…



THE END!

6 comments:

  1. Hey Rose ;)

    Two thumbs up buddy, you're a terrific writer! I love the intensity in your story!;) GRUESOME but still entertaining lol Just as my curiosity was about to increase even more you had a "to be continued"... lol

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  3. Wow this is really good! You're really good at writing, i liked all the blood and gore haha. the 'to be continued..' also really made me want to read more, you have a really good grasp on the themes and chracters awesome work homie

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  4. Hi Rose

    I really enjoyed reading your story and how you brought all this characters together I admire your writing , when I saw the girl with dragon tattoo I cried , your story is full of blood , I kinda like it :)

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  5. I really liked this! I thought I wouldn't cos blood and gore isn't really my thing, but the way you portrayed it was really good. I thought it was cool how you kept building tension throughout the story,making us want to read on. Although not cool hoy you ended with a cliffhanger!

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  6. Thanks guys! much appreciated :)

    As for the 'To Be Continued...', I'm glad it ended on a high, and gave the effect I was looking for...CLIFFHANGER haha.
    I hope you guys left craving for more, rather than feeling frustrated :)

    CHEERS, Rose.

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